#FridayFotoFiction
The Escape
Her scarf came undone, letting loose her auburn curls which flew around her face as she raced down the pavement. Dodging fellow walkers, baby strollers, leashed dogs; she paused to check behind her. The three men were still hot on her trail. Breathing hard, she turned into an alley and hit a dead-end. Panicking she looked around and noticed a door standing smack-bang in the middle of the street. A shimmer of light glowed from under it while a pair of keys dangled from the lock. Knowing she only had a few seconds, she turned the key and ……..
Linking up this post for Day #9 of the Ultimate Blog Challenge
Writing this 100 word post for the prompt #FridayFotoFiction #Week7 and linking it here
Hey Shalini, your take on the prompt is just perfect. However, I am still not able to think what to write….
Thanks Geethica. All the best with your attempt, looking forward to reading it soon!
Nice play of words and love the cliff hanger. Daroon, shotti!
Thanks so much Natasha – I am assuming that Bengali and its complimentary!!! 😉
Simply awesome, Shalini. I love the taut writing that leaves the reader wanting more! Loved it!
Thanks M. Loved the prompt as its allowing me to flex my writing muscles 😉
That’s a good one, Shalini. I loved te way it ended. On a safe note and that’s how I see it 🙂
thanks Parul. I am just exploring my writing with such prompts
Love this! What is ‘Friday Foto Fiction’? Is it something anyone can sign up for? I’m always looking for ways to boost my creative writing…
Thanks Cindy- yeah its a prompt based writing. Shared the link on the facebook posting; hope to see you attempting it this week! Cheers
And… And… Whatt… You just left me like that… I want to knowwww… A curious cat like me will never sleep… OK I will just assume that hides in there and is safe. Loved the fast paced narration.
Thanks so much Raj. Yeah she went in and was safe or maybe there was an alternate universe…. Keep hanging till there is another fictional post to write and maybe I could then expand on this! Cheers
Phew! fast paced and gripping! Lovely pic as well!
Thanks so much Divyakshi – cant take credit for the pic as its part of the prompt. But yeah had to be short and brief with my words as the limit is 100 words- glad to know I could convery it all
Wonderful take on the prompt, Shalu. Enjoyed your depth of writing in your words!!!
Thanks Vasantha 🙂
Thats an incredible tale , your stories always bring curiosity in readers mind .happy reading 🙂
Thanks Bushra- your comments are always so sweet n full of praise!
This is beautiful Shalzy, I wish I had read it earlier.
Thanks so much T – I wish so too!! My bad!! But posting today for the next one and linking it up too